Mystery

The mystery
of a woman’s
nakedness
is more about
the sharing of secrets
than
curves
and
about giving
rather than exposure.

Reviews

[CS]

The naked spirit is the most beautiful thing about a women. Just as the exposed heart is the most beautiful part about a man. It has nothing to do with flesh or sexuality. Being with someone you feel safe enought to be nude around....well....isn't that what we all hope for? For someone to solve that mystery?

Nice work on this, Revery :)

[Revery]

Wow Courtney, your review is poignant and beautiful. Thank you for reading and reviewing my poem.

[CS]

It is always my pleasure. I am a fan :)

[Belle]

You two said it all. I cannot add for more. Beautiful write Dear Revery. I always love short read but filled with meaning.

[Jack...]

It is comfort in the eyes of the beholder. Great piece here. You touch on so many ideas in a small amount of words.

[Revery]

Thank you. I could elaborate more or add to it if I tried.

[Jack...]

I don't think it needs anything else. It is perfect the way it is.

[Yellow Butterfly]

The nakedness between a man and a woman should not be seen as a mystery but as a gift. Your words convey a beautiful message in this piece creating precisely the fullness of what intimacy is all about when you lay your souls bare with one another.

Written with so much passion.. loved it :o)

[Revery]

Thank you dear. We haven't spoken in a while, I hope your doing well.

[Yellow Butterfly]

Your Welcome :o)

[Priscilla Sayers]

This is so true.... It is the experience of truly knowing who she is and where her most inner soul is revealed. Beyond the physical lies a much deeper connection for a woman is layered, her essence intense and her thoughts and emotions are complex. Physical beauty fades, changes, there is no mystery in that.
What a lovely piece my friend. It sends such a potent message and being a woman, well of course I love it!
XX

[Revery]

Thank you Priscilla for commenting so eloquently and sharing the beauty of understanding. I am blessed by your comments.

[Priscilla Sayers]

:) We did it again. haha!

[Pax]

you have fortold the secrets of a great relationship.... the beauty of a woman shows on how she open her soul to you for you to dive in and embrace the fullness of her whole being. Great write my friend!

[Revery]

Thank you Pax, I appreciate your attention to my work and your friendship. You are a quality soul that so many admire, including me.

[Pax]

wow that's really a great compliment... thank you... you are as well...your words are admirable...and your most welcome...

[Summer]

Like the old saying goes

"less is sometimes more"

the mystery of woman, waiting to be revealed.

[Revery]

Thank you for reading and commenting. I totally agree.

[Nona]

mystery has always been more emotionally and intellectually engaging than the actual revealing of secrets... why? because the power of human imaginations is so much greater than anything the reality has to offer...

great capture of the universal wisdom!

[Revery]

Yes erotic permeates throughout mystery right up to the surrender of want and giving, whether secrets or flesh, hmmm. Fun thoughts. lol

[Robbie~xoxo~]

You write with eloquence, capturing the most irresistible part of a woman's essence. That's why I love your heart...you expose the most tender side. The secrets are savored in the mystery. Pure perfection!

[Revery]

Wow, your review is so wonderful dear. Treasure every word you use to respond to my writing. Thank you so much for commenting.

[Emerald Seas]

Beautiful writing, Revery. You captured the essence of woman beyond all the physical. Simply stunning thought - articulated with a fine touch.

[Revery]

Thank you dear. Hope all is well in your world.

[LA Lorena]

I couldn't agree more. anyone can be nude. only those who truly know can dare to walk naked.

[Revery]

Being exposed at the level of the soul is far more powerful than simple physical exposure.