Once

I dedicate this to The Beautiful Miss Mary Beth, my lover, my wife.

The distance between my thoughts
led to a subtle place

In a trance 
dancing with words
and expressing the
delicate allure of passion

The piercing strength
of one tender touch

A single touch
between you and I

But Love

This is every touch
between you and I

Reviews

[Robbie~xoxo~]

The words dance across the page... delicately weaving a passion within a timeless piece. You have captured a momentus expression of an intimate emotion. So entrancing! So lovely...I had to read this a few times! Well penned!

[Revery]

Love your descriptions.

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Thank you...but it' true. :)

[Antonio Valentino]

love that first line my friend..

you are a blessed man to share such adoration for one another..

she's a lucky woman as are you..

i mean you're a lucky man, not a woman.. oh forget it hah

you know what im trying to say..

this is really sweet and tender.. if only we all could have such gifts in our lives..

wonderful sir

may it continue always

:)

[Revery]

I try to keep the passion as strong every time. I said try, not accomplish. Life is meant to be lived passionately. I can see that you understand a phrase and outlook like that.

Thank you for reading and commenting. I am honored by your comments on my poems.

[Antonio Valentino]

passion comes in many flavors doesnt it.. sometimes just spending a whole day together without even saying much to one another is still very meaninful.. the coals may turn to embers but its the longevity of sharing and compromising together that keep that hot glow smoldering in our hearts.. the honor is mutual my friend.. :)

[Revery]

So true!