Once

I dedicate this to The Beautiful Miss Mary Beth, my lover, my wife.

The distance between my thoughts
led to a subtle place

In a trance 
dancing with words
and expressing the
delicate allure of passion

The piercing strength
of one tender touch

A single touch
between you and I

But Love

This is every touch
between you and I

Reviews

[SashaBella]

Breathtakingly beautiful.

[Revery]

Thank you SashaBella

[MOON]

Lovely soulful write.

[Revery]

Thank you Moon. :)

[Revery]

Serene and pure ode to love, and your love to spread for her.
I adore the flow, of this one, and the beauty of letting it in it's ease.

Exceptional Revery.

E.L.

[Revery]

Thank you Eli, I love you description and appreciation. :)

Very welcome dear poet, it's a beautiful poem! well done!

[Revery]

:)

[Yellow Butterfly]

The piercing strength
of one tender touch" ~ Revery

This line alone carries so much depth and soul...

IIt is always a pleasure to read your words....... :o)

[Revery]

Thank you for reading and reviewing. :)

[Yellow Butterfly]

Your welcome & Thank you for your comment/lovely greeting on my profile page ;o)

[Stanley Wilson]

brilliant!!

[Revery]

Thank you Stanley.

[Nautili]

Lovely. it is cool when you look at your lover with new eyes; a new appreciation and fondness, and desire as well. it is as though your eye have been opened and you look down and there are ruby slippers on your feet. Well, that would be funny if you had those on.....lol.

[Revery]

Lol, When I was dating my wife she had a convertible with big ruby slippers hanging from her rear view mirror. I had special permission to take them down if I ever drove her car, haha.

Thank you for the review, and I am so happy that we share this understanding.

[olla]

you express your abiding passion well.. I live the first line.. it captured my attention for the lines that followed..

[Revery]

Thank you Olla. That highlight the importance of the first few lines to set the mood and pace.

[emmajoy]

Beautiful, sincere, eternal.

[Revery]

Thank you Emma Joy. Hope your feeling better today.

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So tender and touching. Amazing expression :)

[Revery]

Thank you Lynn!

[Robbie~xoxo~]

This is a classic...could be a wonderful note or card to all loves! A great Tribute indeed!! Love it!

[Revery]

Thank you Robbie, I always cherish your comments and attention.

[Robbie~xoxo~]

:) You're welcome.