Once

I dedicate this to The Beautiful Miss Mary Beth, my lover, my wife.

The distance between my thoughts
led to a subtle place

In a trance 
dancing with words
and expressing the
delicate allure of passion

The piercing strength
of one tender touch

A single touch
between you and I

But Love

This is every touch
between you and I

Reviews

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Simply sweet and loving.

[Revery]

Thank you Leona. :)

[Tate Morgan]

i feel that way of my own wife and thank the powers that be that i am happy and not alone in this llife

[Revery]

I completely understand. Thank you for reading and commenting.

[Summer]

Your thoughts seem warm and inviting.

In a trance
dancing with words
and expressing the
delicate allure of passion

melting here!

[Revery]

hmmm, enjoying your reviews, melting and all. ;)

[Summer]

The cafe already seems warm.

[Frieda P]

A huge smile happened upon my face and I felt all warm and gooey reading this, it's simply beautiful....

[Revery]

Oh my, I absolutely love your review. You've endeared me with the use of the word "gooey". :) Love it. Thank you Frieda.

[Frieda P]

:) welcome

[Pax]

aah... Romantic and sweet... a very well expressed thoughts about long distance relationship... well distance is just at arms reach when two soul is in one Harmonious bond...

[Revery]

Thank you, but actually written for my beloved wife so not too long distance. This is one of my personal favorites out of my work. Thank you for reading. You are a great light here amongst the poets of writers cafe.

[Patrick]

That first line, 'the distance between my thoughts' is so captivating..it makes the whole..which in itself is tender and true

[Revery]

Thank you sir. When I try to captivate an experience like this in words it's almost like my thought process has to go into slow motion to comprehend. The first line describes that feeling. I appreciate you reading and commenting.

[Michael G.]

Thoughtful... loving.

[Revery]

Thank you Michael.

[Kat Wildd]

I love the flow of this piece and had to read it several times just to experience it again...well written

[Revery]

Thank you Kat, you words are kind.

[Half Dream]

Very lovely. :D

[Revery]

Thank you dear. Hope your well.