Conscious

On the delicate frost of yesterday

 

My memory floats like a leaf

 

My want fights to notice

 

and take account

 

All fears lost to ecstasy

 

but lucid sensibility

 

begs for reason

 

and a penumbra of a

 

conscious thought

 

flies just beyond my reach. 

 

Reviews

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

My want fights to notice and take account...........excellent Revery!

[Revery]

Thank you Neva, I am so blessed to receive your kind review.

[MOON]

beautiful write floating perfectly your words.

[Revery]

Thank you for reading and commenting. I felt the floating sensation when I wrote it.

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Very thought provoking piece you have here, my dear friend. Our minds are a very powerful force. Great job.

[Revery]

Cord, thank you for reading and commenting. I haven't had a chance to review some of yours, but I have read and it's very impressive.

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Thank you

[Revery]

This yearning and not catching is beautifully discribed in this excellent poem.
Almost so gone with the wind... loved it.

E.L.

[Revery]

Thank you Eli, cherish your comments. Love the new avatar, gorgeous!

Aw thanks, your write was stunning!

[Coyote Poetry]

Hard to make peace with the conscious. Many right and wrong decision dance in our heads. Thank you for the outstanding poem. Made me think this afternoon.
Coyote

[Revery]

If it made you think I take that as a compliment. Thank you for reading and commenting.

[marlayesterday]

This is lovely. The picture with it, exquisite. Great work!

[Revery]

I was thrilled with the picture and the words flowed. This one just poured out onto the page. Loved writing it.

[That_Girl]

A wonderfully romantic piece. Well done. :)

[Revery]

It has a swirl of romance to it, doesn't it. Thank you.

[Sleeping Maiden]

Oooo...I love this~ taking in all the lucid thoughts here! ~
=D Lovely! Well done! Such a write!

[Revery]

Thank you for reading and commenting. Love that you loved it. Thank you

[Sleeping Maiden]

No problem~
=D

[eglantine]

reminds me a bit of lethologica..

[Revery]

Didn't think of it that way, but maybe, lol. Thank you for reading and commenting.

[Priscilla Sayers]

A master of romance. Placing a gorgeous image into the mind's eye.

[Revery]

Thank you dear. Love your words, so encouraging.

[Priscilla Sayers]

Always a pleasure:)