The Beautiful Miss

That moment

 

That one shining moment

 

I saw you

 

Not for the first time

 

but I saw you

 

Now

 

The air was alive

 

One of those mornings

 

where the sun

 

danced through

 

large sanctuary windows.

 

You!

 

You were glorious

 

The sun dress,

 

The dancer’s posture

 

The long stunning hair

 

You were stunning

 

perfection! 

 

It was the moment

 

That changed everything

 

Now

 

Race across the years

 

The daisies

 

The kiss in the rain

 

The vows

 

The babies

 

And

 

You and me. 

Reviews

[eglantine]

*blasted

cut out "you were stunning!" since you already used 'stunning' and wow that escalated fast lol good life-flashes

[Revery]

Thank you for reading and commenting. I always appreciate your well thought out comments.

[MOON]

Flowing tribute to a love that stood test of time , like how you conveyed how you saw her like " i see you mind , body and soul" lovely

[Revery]

Thank you moon, I appreciate you read and comments.

[marlayesterday]

I like how this flows, and how through the years, the feelings are still the same. Love it! :)

[Revery]

Thank you Marla, this one was inspired by our anniversary.

[Priscilla Sayers]

Beautiful. A soft delicate piece that warms my heart to read such innocent perfection!

[Revery]

Thank you dear. Your my hero, did you know that?

[Priscilla Sayers]

Na ~ah! Silly!

[Heather]

I love this, how you really saw her, not just looked at her, and then years later the love that is still there, you still see her. Beautiful, touching, I enjoyed this delightful piece.

[Revery]

Thank you so much Heather! :)

[Robbie~xoxo~]

This is timeless...a piece that holds precious thoughts and cherished memories. What a beautiful tribute to your wife! You are, who you are today, because of the beauty you share. Gorgeous write!

[Revery]

Thank you Robbie, I love your affirmation.

[Robbie~xoxo~]

It was soft spoken, yet powerfully conveyed. Breathtaking!

[Nona]

The beautiful miss must be the happiest wife ever! what a gorgeous tribute to the first magic moment of love!

[Revery]

Thank you Nona. I love your review.

[sienikeha]

ah, beautiful . :)

[Revery]

Thank you dear.

[Belle]

A love story with a blithe ending.
I like how you sequencely put everything into words.

[Revery]

Thank you for you comments, it was fun to write.

[Kimberly "Melody" Carne..]

Oh, this is a most wonderful write. Your words perfectly placed!

[Revery]

Thank you Melody, I love that this stood out for you.