The Beautiful Miss

That moment

 

That one shining moment

 

I saw you

 

Not for the first time

 

but I saw you

 

Now

 

The air was alive

 

One of those mornings

 

where the sun

 

danced through

 

large sanctuary windows.

 

You!

 

You were glorious

 

The sun dress,

 

The dancer’s posture

 

The long stunning hair

 

You were stunning

 

perfection! 

 

It was the moment

 

That changed everything

 

Now

 

Race across the years

 

The daisies

 

The kiss in the rain

 

The vows

 

The babies

 

And

 

You and me. 

Reviews

[Christie Moses]

This made me smile. It touched my heart with its memories and sweetness. :) Poetry doesn't haven't to be morose to be worth reading. Im a sucker for a happy ending.

[Revery]

Your review made me smile. Thank you Christie

[Seashell]

A lovers tale with a happy ending
Wonderful
Thanks
X

[Revery]

Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed. :)

[Leigh]

Simply Beautiful - I enjoyed this very much

[Revery]

Thank you so much for reading and for your compliment.

[Emerald Seas]

Beautifully written piece to your bride!
Well done, my friend :)

[Revery]

Thank you Sirrah and thank you for being a great friend.

[Baby Ricochet]

WOW! That was awesome. We've all had that feeling of captivation at first site. Beautiful portrail of in this write

[Revery]

Thanks man.

[Revery]

This is lovely, this is perfection, and an ode for her.
I truly felt each step to bliss, and I admire your love
You share with us, thank you Rev. ~peace

E.L.

[Revery]

Eli, your words are rain in the desert to me. Thank you so much for reading and commenting on my poetry.

Always a pleasure dear poet! you have the skills to make us fly ~

[Junert]

Lovely

[Revery]

Thank you Junert. :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Those good memories will never leave us. When I look at pictures of old. See youth and I'm thankful I held on to one woman. Those kisses in the rain and raising babies insure two people have a permanent bond. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Revery]

Thank you for the review, I'm glad you connected to it. Its good to hang onto living in the moment and appreciating what we have or the memories of those that came through our lives.

[Laura Maidah]

Ahhh this is evocative of perfection

[Revery]

Thank you Laura. :)

[Laura Maidah]

Yes. yes.

[Yellow Butterfly]

You have a remarkable way of exposing your soul within all that you write. As your words flow freely down the page the imagery you have used makes this so real and vivid and you can not help but feel the passion throughout. This is a beautiful accolade to the one you love and is true testimony that you are a romantic at heart and a wonderful poet.

This sincerely is poetry in motion.....

[Revery]

Thank you so much, it's an honor to receive such affirming words from you.

[Yellow Butterfly]

Your very welcome..