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Compartment 114
Compartment 114
Fat thights

Fat thights

A Poem by You're not in it alone

Alone together
We wore nothing but cloaks of darkness

And I could feel you smiling as we kissed.
Tentatively you reached out,
Placed a shaking hand around my waist

And drew me closer.
I could feel your quick breaths on my skin
And your heart beat like a drum
As your lips slowly traced the outline of my silhouette,

Pausing only to whisper "I love you".
We embraced, realeasing the tension of excitement
And the endorphines rushed through our veins
Perfectly synchronised
Our hearts beat in time to the harmony of our sighs.

As the heat rose, so did the volume,
And I found myself screaming your name.

We slowed and moved apart,
Still feeling as though we were one,
And laid amidst the tangled sheets.

 


We always believed we'd be that way forever
Still bonded by the ties of that beautiful exchange...
But, it seems,
All good things come to an end.


                                   Then I started crying because my thighs were too fat :'(

© 2011 You're not in it alone


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I loved this! It was great.
♥ Ta'Shandra

Posted 13 Years Ago


I love it! Hahaha My thighs are my biggest insecurity too so I get that part, but I love the description, and the passion pulsating off the page. Lovely!

Posted 13 Years Ago


i love it

Posted 13 Years Ago


loved it! remember, love is INSIDE... it is a connection deep in the soul... not about thighs. :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


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if he's giving you sex like that..he's not worried about your thighs..

Posted 13 Years Ago


this rings a bell... :P

Posted 13 Years Ago


love the negating end!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Thighs and size shouldn't matter right?? Great write...xx

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on May 11, 2011
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You're not in it alone
You're not in it alone

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Hey, I'm Gary, I'm single and 36(Yes, I'm getting an old little bugger, but I live every second of my life). I write what ever I feel like writing about, I tend to get writers block a lot, which str.. more..

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