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Compartment 114
Compartment 114
Always..

Always..

A Poem by Retro_Wave

Always will the flame burn bright.

The spark in your eyes sets the love in my heart ablaze.
It makes my heart dance and flutter in a craze.
The heat burns bright and has no way of dying out.
Your smile is the only fuel it needs and is allowed.
It incinerates every care in the world and has no direction but towards you.
The only person the flame burns is for you.
Its embers flicker and the heat crackles with every mention of your presence.
The music of your voice ensures that the flame never lessens.
For the fire of my love burns always.
And it will be there until the end of days.

© 2017 Retro_Wave


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Beautiful!

I like how you compared love to an eternal flame; so romantic!

The only love they are allowed to receive is from one person... I like that.. It sounds to me like the person may be limiting themselves to one lover. Hopefully they'd find that, if you feel the need for more than one, the first was never enough. It was written in a very attractive manner.

I enjoyed this!!! They're one lucky soul, the receiver of this poem.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Retro_Wave

7 Years Ago

Thank you! Oh yes,I was inspired by someone very close to me when I wrote this poem. Not my best wor.. read more



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This is so beautiful!! Just amazing really

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautiful!

I like how you compared love to an eternal flame; so romantic!

The only love they are allowed to receive is from one person... I like that.. It sounds to me like the person may be limiting themselves to one lover. Hopefully they'd find that, if you feel the need for more than one, the first was never enough. It was written in a very attractive manner.

I enjoyed this!!! They're one lucky soul, the receiver of this poem.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Retro_Wave

7 Years Ago

Thank you! Oh yes,I was inspired by someone very close to me when I wrote this poem. Not my best wor.. read more
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ITs very beautiful
Filled with romance
and within itself have this fire burning of passion and life

I really liked reading this one !!!

Posted 7 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

my heart only burns for you,sweet love poem

Posted 7 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Added on April 3, 2017
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