No Doubt for a Lying man

No Doubt for a Lying man

A Poem by PillsDontWork
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A part of a four poem story i will be writing about a man who changes the world through lies

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As a child alone in the corner i sat
As my mother and father lived in an old two bedroom flat
Saints that clad themselves in robes frightened me
Demons clad in guns entertained me
as i rose to Young adulthood i lost my faith
as i stayed in my youth i became a wraith
deceit and lies make me sane
thunder and death numb my pain
alone riding the seas called life
i fired an arrow to God in one strife 
it did not hit the man in white 
It merely fell back to the earth 
from and incredible height
call me what you may 
say what you have to say
but soon the masses will see
some day my vision will be freed

© 2014 PillsDontWork


Author's Note

PillsDontWork
Please keep an open mind

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Reads as the darker side of life and losing your religion. We all don't live in the light...both sides reside within us all. Intriguing read.

i fired 'an' arrow

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

PillsDontWork

10 Years Ago

Thanks for the comment ......and i really should fix my grammatical errors thanks for pointing it ou.. read more
Frieda P

10 Years Ago

You're welcome, was my pleasure.

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Added on March 23, 2014
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PillsDontWork
PillsDontWork

Paranaque, NCR, Philippines



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Truth be told i was born in 1998 , I have views on life that may not be the right cup of tea for people other than me so i must always say "keep an open mind" Real name- Marlon Valdez Interests- Boo.. more..

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