Lost

Lost

A Poem by RetreatBackToHell
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I am lost

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I was walking straight
But now there is a wall
I wait where her foots will go
and there I can wait eternity alone

left or right 
I will find the person and bring him to fight
as for me he is the one who divide the path 
to make her mine and hold her tight

without you I am lost
when I wake up, I want to see you first
the smell of you surrounding the air
losing that presence is my biggest fear

To have you near my dear
Is the only dream of this mortal mere.

© 2024 RetreatBackToHell


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I love how the poet decides to wait for his love at a wall and that he is willing to wait there forever to be there when she arrives. The writer wants to be with his love and fears losing her. His only dream is to have her near, to be with her, to love her. I like this poem very much. It is a sweet and warm write, romantic too. Nice work RBTH! Thank you for sharing...

Posted 4 Months Ago



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Added on November 23, 2024
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