Last Letters.

I wrote this poem last night .Took me 2 hours because I don't write poems- correction, I don't do a lot of writing. So, I'm still a noob in writting. >.< This poem is about suicide, basically.

“Falling's not the problem, when I'm falling I'm at peace.

It's only when I hit the ground it causes all the grief.”

 

When life is deliberately demanding,

Luscious honey becomes wickedly disgusting.

We’ve acknowledged to distinguish behind the ignorant glitter,

  And comprehended the revelations of our futures that seemed sweet but bitter.

 

As we illuminated the exasperating flames that we inquire.

There’ll be no need from the ashes of the already lifeless fire.

The hollow moon as our lifetime witness and my final friend,

Will contemplate and accompany us on our march to our end.

 

We stayed true to never sow the seeds that devour us to become cruel,

Our pitiful crime declares that our time has arrived for joyous renewal.

Though our lives were full of heartless and pleasant sorrow;

I promise, tomorrow will be the ‘better’ tomorrow.

 

Impulsively, my six senses become extinct; simply replaced by subtle apathy.

My grief-stricken tears that flow can see everything with lucid mortality.

And I howl unclear pitches inaugurating from life’s hypnagogic strain,

But, my restrained cries astray in the cumbrous rain.

 

You are insignificant now.

Fallen sorrow.

I am insignificant now.

Sinful sorrow.

 

A motionless Ice-box next to me.

Unimportant matter that I deny to see.

A motionless ice-box that I’ll soon be.

Because soon united we’ll be set free.

My love, No more distress or forlorn,

There’ll be beacon when we are reborn.

No more addiction to suffer.

This time we’ll be tougher.

 

You’ll always be my only beloved one,

Even after this shameful act that we’ve done.

Creeping so slowly comes my death,

So, I’ll remind you with my last breath.

 

“Always there to wish you well,

No decaying or a place called Hell.”

 

Reviews

[MJReed]

deep stuff....

[Resuri]

Ahah, Yes. I hope you enjoyed reading this! :D