His Twisted Tale

Her wrote this back to me. As you can tell, we would talk in poetry. Okay, im done with this story stuff. xD

A DARK PARADISE

Come with me. Far away. 

To a place where we can bathe in darkness. 

Be alone. Away from People. Away from family. 

Away from time. Away from life. 

Come bask in the dim light that touches our souls. 

Come be with he who you ask for. 

Come wipe your tears of pain and sorrow on my black cloak. 

Let my warmth defrost your cold, jagged heart. 

Come live beside me in our lifeless realm where

 shadows are at our beck and call. 

Come be with me my Black Queen.

Reviews

[I Am Svetlana]

I love dark poetry and I love how you put this together. You obviously had a good idea in mind and you knew what you were talking about. You put in some amazing imagery that I can't even describe in words...n yes, it gave me chills.

[Break The Broken]

wow. just wow! amazing all together and the ending gave me chills!

Come be with me my Black Queen.

[paparapapa]

Oooh. I had chicken skin. Haha. Anyway, this is one of the times when the dark's tempting - when our special someone is in it. But if we are talking figuratively here, then it's your job to bring him to lightness. Just saying. :)) anyway, great poem!

[The XYZ Writer]

Wow,that was a pretty dark poem. I couldn't imagine something like that before, but with this poem I just did. Nice write!