None Given

F**k!
F**k!
F**k!
Count it up
There's three
Three f***s that I just gave for attention

I can't give too much of myself, though
Certain things I give no f***s about
They can't have me
No matter how hard they try

My dead end job
The late rent
The rules of society
How much alcohol I drank last night
Consequences of a bad idea
Opinions about who I am

They can all f**k off

But, then there's her
With curves that ooze sex
Lips that are waiting to be devoured
Eyes that say "Give me your best shot"

She opens her legs
Inviting me in
F**k it
Take everything

A f**k on the bed
A f**k on the floor
A f**k against the wall
A f**k in the afternoon
Another f**k at night
And a f**k after that
A f**k on top
A f**k from the bottom
A f**k from behind
A f**k sideways
A f**k here
A f**k there
A f**k everywhere

She gave me her all
And I gave her a lot
But, I had to keep one for myself
I couldn't give a f**k after I left

Reviews

[olla]

it is raw.. but it is real.. I have no issue with real.. and you carried it off well too..

[V]

I read two twists in your writing, leading to a somewhat circular play with the word f**k. I like the directness of it and how you turned a general content into a sensual one and back to the beginning. Definitely interesting.

[Timothy Ryan]

Thank you for the review. That's a great way of putting it "circular". Sounds like you understood what I was going for. Which means I did something right. Thanks again.

[V]

You're welcome. I'm glad I got it and it's a smart way of writing.

[Papaya]

Here a f**k, there a f**k, everywhere a f**k f**k...

I like the ending, the guy taking back his sanity... It sounds like she drove him nuts.

[Timothy Ryan]

Honestly, I didn't write it with that in mind, but it fits perfectly haha. Maybe I'm better than i give myself credit for. Thank you for your time and your review.