Fall

Fall

A Poem by Renette Hollow

To Fall
Is to 
Fly
Even if only
For a Moment.
For to Fall
Is when your Heart
Feels 
Like it has sprouted 
Wings 
And taken
Flight 
Even if all you did
Was Fall.

© 2013 Renette Hollow


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True - but what's the point? I think this is too brief to keep it as just a descriptive sort of poem, and if you want to make it longer you'd need to add in some kind of narrative or story, or at least expound on the topic a little more. Feels like a good start, but there's not much substance as of yet.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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True - but what's the point? I think this is too brief to keep it as just a descriptive sort of poem, and if you want to make it longer you'd need to add in some kind of narrative or story, or at least expound on the topic a little more. Feels like a good start, but there's not much substance as of yet.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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