Love me so

I dreamed about you again

For once, I wasn't in any pain

You were holding me so very tight

And the world seemed full of light

I know you still hold my heart

It's been that way from the start

I wouldn't have it any other way

As long as by my side you stay

You don't have to promise me anything

You just have to be my everything

Just tell me you still love me too

Even after everything we've been through

I feel so very lost without your hand in mine

And I'm frightened that I might not be in time

To convince you that you're the one for me

I'm scrambling to catch you, don't you see? 

I'm scared you're going to let me fall

That you'll just watch as I lose it all

But I can't and I won't give up on you

Especially when you say you love me, too

I don't want you to pick her over me

But I know what must be will be

And that if you want her more than me 

You will not hesitate to pick she

But right now I'm lost in happy dreams

One where things are what they seem

And you still love me with all your heart

That's all I wanted from the start

So now I really must know

Do you still love me so? 

Reviews

[Trigorin]

Not bad. Your topic is a little generic, but there are a few good lines here and there that really stand out. I think you really ought to use more imagery - as it stands, the piece feels very bare.