Now Or Never

Just a quick note to the one I've once lost.

 

 

 

You've Once Told Me;

 

"Better Make It Now Or Never"

 

I've Made My Choice And Made It "Now"

 

 

 

For A Real Long Time

 

We've Gone A Long Way Together

 

And We've Made It So Real

 

Until You've Stopped Making It Real

 

 

 

For Years, I've Never Stopped Thinking Of You

 

Not A Day Goes By Without Thinking Of You

 

 

 

Now It's Raining And The Time Had Changed

 

It's My Turn To Tell You;

 

"Better Make It Now Or Never"

 

And It's Up To You To Make Your Choices

 

 

 

Say "Now" And "Hi"

 

You Can Hold And Keep Me Forever

 

Say "Never" And "Bye"

 

You'll Have To Let Me Go For Good

 

There Is No Between

 

 

 

Tell Me What You Want

 

We Can Greet With Our Eyes On Each Other

 

Just Tell Me What You Want

 

We Can Bid Farewell Without Hurting Each Other

 

Please, Tell Me What You Want

 

 

 

Please, Say A Word

 

I Want You To Say "Now"

 

Please, Say Something

 

I Don't Want You To Say "Never"

 

Please, Say Anything

 

 

 

If You Say "Now"

 

Things Will Be Better Than Ever

 

Please, Don't Ever Let Me Go Again

 

 

 

If You Say "Never"

 

There's No Turning Back

 

And, Please, Let Me Go

 

Before It Stop Raining...

 

 

 

Author's Note

Hard painful lessons in life to acknowledge: Physical Pains; You'll get over them, Mentally Pains; You'll get used to them, BUT, Emotional Pains; They're just like any damn scars that won't go away.

Reviews

[Timothy Ryan]

You captured a desperate moment that a l of of people have gone through. The lines were a little a heavy and vague. You managed to give the reader a general idea of the situation, but it didn't really feel like you dove in all the way. I think if you gave a few lines of little details after statements like "Until You've Stopped Making It Real" and "Not A Day Goes By Without Thinking Of You", then it really becomes a personal piece and gives it a deeper meaning instead of a general one. Thank you for sharing.

[Kim S.]

If You Say "Never"
There's No Turning Back
And, Please, Let Me Go
Before It Stop Raining...

Love this and this part, your imagery is powerful

[no tell writer]

We Can Bid Farewell Without Hurting Each Other
Please, Tell Me What You Want

Awesome words, this flows like a song. Love this

[Jade]

emotional scar run so deep, such an emotional write here. Written and expressed so well

[Dust That Drifts Throug..]

This poem accurately describes wanting to say to your crush how you feel about them, but after finally telling them how you feel about them, it's too late.

[Valentine]

One thing I have learned in my lifetime...you cannot beg or make someone love you. Either they do or they don't. The better you treat someone the better chance you have. Valentine

[FateDictates]

so don't want to be there..that to bone ache, and then that nagging voice wondering if they do come back will it be the same...just keep going forward..really..this is a great outlet for you though!!

[Barbara Walker]

A great universal theme, good diction, except for "You've". In these lines you are speaking of the past so it should be "You Had" not You Have". Enjoyed reading!

[P.S.Chance]

this begins like a sad piano piece and completes as a full orchestra. good job.

[Maggie]

You tell a story within a short piece. Good.