The Wondering

Damn "Hamlet" for getting me to think.

 

Alone And Confuse



How Did I Ever Get Them?



What Did I Do Wrong?

Author's Note

I don't know how to make a longer version of it, so I made it short and simple in the Haiku way.

Reviews

[K. Carver]

Very nice.
I feel as though Haiku's say more than the longest poems.

[Fran Marie]

A good Haiku piece~so nicely penned

[deeps]

Such a powerful Hailu here
Like this alot.

[Deborah Leah Krempa]

Short and to the point. Well done. Thank you for sharing. Debileah

[Sean M. Addams]

very powerful piece spoken in so few words.... overall nice job on this and you should post more your writing is respected more than you know!!!

[The Viking]

"Alone and Confuse" needs a 'D' at the end. Otherwise, I liked it. Short and simple in the true haiku form, but it contains the feeling of lonely disillusionment one feels. A series of these wouldn't be out of the question.