This is absolutely brilliant. I love the satire on children's poetry. It starts off with such a cute name and cute imagery, peaceful and fun and playful. And ends with a wheel running over a small, furry creature with swear words and rubber. There are some points when the rhythm feels slightly off, but overall this was a wonderful poem. Truly hilarious!
This is absolutely brilliant. I love the satire on children's poetry. It starts off with such a cute name and cute imagery, peaceful and fun and playful. And ends with a wheel running over a small, furry creature with swear words and rubber. There are some points when the rhythm feels slightly off, but overall this was a wonderful poem. Truly hilarious!
omygosh Joseph, don't know wheter to laugh, giggle, smile, or go ewww, or go oh no! poor little squirrel!
the things we get a kick out of nature,
I saw two bettles lovemaking, yeah, lovemaking, and they flusterred together till smash, they collided to fatality, oddities iin life I tell ya! ---mwah! ---mishy
Awww.. poor.. squirrel.. lol. You know I had to do it. :) A great piece that had me chuckling throughout and going :O at the end. You have a wicked sense of humor.. but truly.. some of those squirrels are a tad stupid. Met one just the other day and he almost had the same fate as Happy. A few inches and it would have been CRUNCH! :)
awwww but what about the poor squirrel :P
yeah I admit..... it was a wonderful sounding day (nice and very creative) I was all into it I mean really got my undivided attention and then bam! I can so relate, since we motocross, you take a chance everytime you start the bike (but a life without it? nope can imagine it... so yeah go for it and live each day to the fullest) (-: awesome work Joseph-Michael
You are right...It was a good day to die. Very nice...I liked it. Maybe we should all take a lesson from him and not stay holed up in our own nests. Death can come for you at any time. Why not get out there and enjoy life in the meantime and stop hiding. Good Work!!
Such a fable~ indeed every day is a sublime act of faith and fate has her way..he may have died, but would his life been any better just stuck in the hole in the tree? No, I dare not think so....better to live an hour or TRULY living then penned up in a jail of fear. "Better to go out in a blaze then fade away" ~kirgin (or something like that)
I'm no one special. I'm just a single father in the MMA training to kill the anger and the personal pain in order to move on. Whenever I'm not busy, even with the damn procrastination issue, I try my .. more..