Name Your Poison

Just another of those quick haiku as some quick learning lesson for everybody that need to know and to be warned about.

 

The Most Poisonous

 

The Kind That Will Never Die

 

They Are Human Hearts

Author's Note

Sure, there are all kind of poisons everywhere now, but there's nothing far more deadlier than the human hearts which are filled with all kind of sins.

Reviews

[Michelle Lea]

Yes I have to agree and especially with the part in your Author's note "there's nothing far more deadlier than the human hearts which are filled with all kind of sins..." But to live, love, have sorrow, pain and joy are all apart of our wonderful mysterious lives.... and without some of the sinning, well where would we get some of our writing inspirations from without it?! :P

[Ahmad Alhour]

Short one... But it is one of the most deep and meaningful says I have ever heard of in my entire life...
And unfotunately... you are right mate!
You know:

"What really interests me in people, is that the more you know them... the more you get your wounds wider!"

With all my respect to all of you here but that is 85% right! unfortunately!

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I read this before, several times in fact. It is very true. Just like the tongue is situated in a precarious position as to taint the soul, no doubt the heart has the potential to corrupt an entire being. It is the commandant and regulator of what we allow in, good or bad based on experiences and perception. The title is also catchy and inviting.

[Blackbirdsong]

Beautifully done Joe...you pack a lot of punch in these few lines...

[Sean M. Addams]

short but really makes you think and makes a very powerful piece.... nice job on this!!!

[darkgurl]

Yes! So very true this is and very well put...Kim

[Angel's Lady]

Oh wow. I would say you nailed this one right on the head. Poison. Yep. Great write. Most ironic and most true most of the time! haha

[*~Imperfectly Me~*]

I think the human heart if filled with hate is one of the deadlier poisons but it can be filled with other things like love and hope... This was a good dark side of humanity poem. It's sad because in some parts of life it's true. We all can see the hate in some people's eyes that scream out from their heart as if it were ready to explode poison over the world. Unfortunatly they usually do. A great Write! Good Job

[Wolfwind Words]

I like it. I think Mary Ann has a good take on this. Darkness is only one side of the human emotions. The other is filled with brilliant light, that can never die.
Sin is an action of pour judgement. It's not of the heart, or at least that my belief.
For if sin was in the heart, it would mean all of us would be filled with sin all the time, and that just isn't so.

You did capture the darkside very well. A great Poem!

Aaron Maycroft

[Leo Gems]

Well we are in a good mood, now aren't we?? You speak truth.. but the human heart can also be filled with love and light and there is no better substitute.

Someone needs a hug.. Soooo... (((Hug))))