Bloody Triumphant: The Fighter's Final Journey

One of my imaginary stories that I'm working on.

 

          In The World Of Dark Heroes...

 

...And Deadly Villains         

 

 

          Into The Darker Jungles...

 

...With The Deadliest Games         

 

 

Yet To Be Fought For

 

 

 

Until The True Warrior Stepped In;

 

 

 

Bonded By Honor ---

 

 

Kept The Loyalty ---

 

 

Gave Out The Respect ---

 

 

Spoke Nothing, But The Truth ---

 

 

 

Along With An Unusual Quest;

 

 

 

He's Fighting For The Life Of His Son

 

He's Fighting For The Love To Be Return

 

He's Fighting For The Legacy Of Himself

 

He's Fighting For The Legend Of The Spirit Within

 

 

 

That Was Until Something Changed :

 

 

 

He Had Been Broken By Dishonor ---

 

 

He Had Been Betrayed By Disloyal ---

 

 

He Had Been Backstabbed By Disrespect ---

 

 

He Had Been Backtalked By The Lies ---

 

 

 

 

God Once Made Him A Man,

 

God Succeeded;

 

Then Nature Tried To Make Him An Animal,

 

Nature Succeeded;

 

Afterward, Corruptions Are Making Him Truly A Beast,

 

Corruptions Are Succeeding;

 

Now, He Only Wants A Revenge...

 

 

 

Author's Note

If you have to know; Yes, he is somewhat based on me in several ways.

Reviews

[Blade & Blood (The ..]

Haha! I knew some of this guy was based on you. "He's Fighting For The Life Of His Son"-- that gave it away. ;)

Anyways, this one's really cool! It's a beastly vibe to it-- I'm pretty sure that was your intention, but you know, it sounds great! :)

"God Made Him A Man;
Nature Made Him An Animal;
Corruptions Made Him Truly A Beast;"

That's my favorite stanza. It has so much truth in it and it really makes you think about the relationship between divine, nature, and society, and their impact on humanity. Heh, it's only natural that they'd want revenge. lol Nice work, buddy. This was a very entertaining read. ^^

Ironically Yours.

[Burr the Story Sorceres..]

You have done it again, my friend. This is another wonderful poem to add to the long list of others.
My favorite lines are "God made him a man; Nature made him an animal; Corruptions made him truely a beast;" They are awesome!
I give it two thumps up.
^_^

[Colleen C Dunphy]

I can totally imagine the moviefone guy reading this!
Haha, Im intriged, cant wait to read more!

All the best,
Lee

[Drow]

I think at the end you missed an s on want. This sounds interesting. I'd like to see how it turns out when you get to it.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

You make a great point here, sometimes people are forced into taking a life like in self defense but somehow it turns into craving when they feel the rush, I throughly enjoyed this piece.