Bloody Triumphant: The Fighter's Final Journey

One of my imaginary stories that I'm working on.

 

          In The World Of Dark Heroes...

 

...And Deadly Villains         

 

 

          Into The Darker Jungles...

 

...With The Deadliest Games         

 

 

Yet To Be Fought For

 

 

 

Until The True Warrior Stepped In;

 

 

 

Bonded By Honor ---

 

 

Kept The Loyalty ---

 

 

Gave Out The Respect ---

 

 

Spoke Nothing, But The Truth ---

 

 

 

Along With An Unusual Quest;

 

 

 

He's Fighting For The Life Of His Son

 

He's Fighting For The Love To Be Return

 

He's Fighting For The Legacy Of Himself

 

He's Fighting For The Legend Of The Spirit Within

 

 

 

That Was Until Something Changed :

 

 

 

He Had Been Broken By Dishonor ---

 

 

He Had Been Betrayed By Disloyal ---

 

 

He Had Been Backstabbed By Disrespect ---

 

 

He Had Been Backtalked By The Lies ---

 

 

 

 

God Once Made Him A Man,

 

God Succeeded;

 

Then Nature Tried To Make Him An Animal,

 

Nature Succeeded;

 

Afterward, Corruptions Are Making Him Truly A Beast,

 

Corruptions Are Succeeding;

 

Now, He Only Wants A Revenge...

 

 

 

Author's Note

If you have to know; Yes, he is somewhat based on me in several ways.

Reviews

[Blade & Blood (The ..]

Haha! I knew some of this guy was based on you. "He's Fighting For The Life Of His Son"-- that gave it away. ;)

Anyways, this one's really cool! It's a beastly vibe to it-- I'm pretty sure that was your intention, but you know, it sounds great! :)

"God Made Him A Man;
Nature Made Him An Animal;
Corruptions Made Him Truly A Beast;"

That's my favorite stanza. It has so much truth in it and it really makes you think about the relationship between divine, nature, and society, and their impact on humanity. Heh, it's only natural that they'd want revenge. lol Nice work, buddy. This was a very entertaining read. ^^

Ironically Yours.

[~Mary Ann~]

This piece shows the truth of the human spirit. Bound by honor, kept by loyalty, and giving out respect. This piece also shows the courage of the human spirit. As the warrior fights for the people that are most important. His son, his love, and himself while maintaining his spirit. By being honorable and loyal and showing others respect, he will get all those things in return and more... the satisfaction of knowing he lived by what was important to him.

Then the outside influences come in and well... lets hope only they have to deal with his wrath!!! lol

Great ink Joseph Michael.. Yes, I am a thinker.. :D

[1809 Black Plague Decem..]

hiya Joseph, love the picture that comes with the poem,
Its boundless in what you strive for, great write, hope you continue the work!
---mishel

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Well this certainly was a teaser! I didn't have to read the Author's Note to know this is based on you :) It has your personal touch. You have definitely peaked my interest, now keep writing!!!! It's great, can't wait to see how this unfolds.

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I like this write as well, very well wriiten and i like the imagery i got from it...Kim

[Sean M. Addams]

very good flow to this and imagery was perfect in this piece.... nice job on this .... fav lines..............He's Fighting For The Life Of His Son



He's Fighting For The Love To Be Return



He's Fighting For The Legacy Of Himself



He's Fighting For The Legend Of The Spirit Within

[Andrea A. Wentz]

lol thanks for adding the "based on me in several ways" part cause that's the first thing I thought when I got done with it :)

I am interested to see how this works itself out, knowing what I do about your life and what each aspect is referring to. It's like fantasy meets real life! :D

[Natalie C]

Wow that was so sneaky of you, specially when you said you are not sure when you are going to start with this. Hey you cannot put something like this on and not have a date for us! *Tease*

Well well, I cannot wait, this really does sound so wonderfully brilliant.
I just loved; (and I think this is where you sold me)

God Made Him A Man;
Nature Made Him An Animal;
Corruptions Made Him Truly A Beast;

Keep me posted ok!

[Michelle Lea]

Awesomely written...I love the flow and the arrangement of the words. Well done again, as always, now I can't wait to see how it turns out! keep writing :P

[darkgurl]

I like this it's very well written
"He's Fighting For The Life Of His Son
He's Fighting For The Love To Be Return
He's Fighting For The Legacy Of Himself
He's Fighting For The Legend Of The Spirit Within" Love these lines here...Kim

[Lyrical Love]

This dangerously intrigues me...somehow, I think it's because of the darkness that I tend to shy away from. Nevertheless, I enjoyed it.