Ascension Of The Fallen

One of my imaginary stories that I'm working on.

 

 

 

 

The Angel...

 

    .                                         

  .                                  

   .                              

    H                         

  a                  

  d             

   

        F   

         a

              l

                  l

                      e

                          n

                                 .

                                     .

                                          .

 

...In Love          

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 Then, He Was Given Choices To Make

 

Somehow

 

He Made A Choice Which He Truly Regrets

 

Tried To Change His Fate

 

His Decision Earned Him Damnation

 

 

 

 

 

 

 Heaven Refused To Accept Him...

 

 

...And Now...

 

 

...Hell Is Fearing That He'll Take Over

 

 

 

 

 

He Threatens To Destroy Everything

 

That Were Created To Serve

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The Never-Ending War Between Heaven And Hell

 

The Epic Battles That Have Been Going On For Centuries

 

 

 

All Of Sudden, It Was Put On Hold

 

Because The Fallen Angel Became Far Worse

 

Than Both Heavenly Angels

 

And Hellish Demons

 

 Ever Will Be

 

Combined...

 

 

 

 

 

Now, For The First Time Ever

 

They All Are In It Together

 

 

On The Hunt For The Most

 

 

               Renegade...

 

 

...Rogue...

 

 

...Ruthless               

 

 

Fallen Of All Time

 

 

 

 

 

He Believes He Overpaid His Due

 

And He Wants His Revenge 

 

For It Was All In The Name Of Love...

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Let me know what you really think, honestly. I guess I really do need some of the encouragements before I go any further, so I don't feel like I'm wasting my time.

Reviews

[Legion]

I like the way you formatted this. All over the place like an angel falling and trying to take flight. Kudos on that. As for the write itself, you have an interesting idea but I think you sell yourself short by limiting your vocabulary on this. Get yourself a dictionary and a thesarus and look at what you have written already. Then use the two to improve on what you have done. This is something I did years ago when I first began writing and it has helped tremendously. It is good, don't get me wrong on that, but I think you can make this remarkable if you try a little more. Kudos.

[Silent Kim aka mizmetap..]

Interesting, loved you presentation. Go on write more. Battles of power, moratlity and love, the possiblities are endless. You have a good start, send me a request when you add more to this epic. I can't wait.

[Ice Queen of the Vampir..]

I LOVE this piece!!! This poem is amazing and the formatting is perfect. One of my new favorites. :) Awesome job!!!

Heather

[Andrea A. Wentz]

Writing is never a waste of time, even if no one else reads it, at least you created a work of art. How often do people look at your drawings, and yet you still created them. :)

As I said before, dramatic and tragic. I really enjoyed this piece because it tells a story, and a painful one at that. It leaves alot of questions unanswered, which I'm looking forward to learning the answers in the continuing story. I love it! :D