Slayers Of The Slaughter

Just one of those short and quick story about bloodbath in the poetry way.

 

One Of The Most Powerful Mobster's Daughters

Had Been Slained By The Infamous Slaughter

 

The Rest Of The Drug Lords And Crime Bosses

Cashed In Their Best Hit Men Without The Losses

 

Learned About The Facts Of The Blood Hunt

The Serial Killer's Happy And Wasn't On The Run

Already Knew The Risk, But Wanted To Stay Around

All Just For The Fun Times On The Playground

Brought Every One Of His Slayers Into His Lurk

Gave Each Of Them The Frightening Smirk

Each Of The Hit Men Deaths Have Grown

Made The Desire Of Watching The Blood Flown

Never Gotten Tired Of The Endless Kills

Only Gave Him The Best Of The Thrills

 

After All Were Turned Into End-Game

About To Get Personal, The Mobster Came

Face To Face For The Very First Time

Fought Without The Acts Of The Crime

 

Revenge Doesn't Always Taste That Sweet

Killer Had Walked Away For New Victims To Meet

 

Author's Note

You have to keep this in mind; There's nothing far worse than a serial killer with a strong desire for the bloodlust.

Reviews

[Nik Dendera]

Awesome piece! Great flow, great images... great everything! Loved the last line, very cool. Says so much with few words.

Serial killers are scary-especially the ones with no real motive. I'm currently researching my next novel and reading up on the psychology behind Dahmer, Rifkin, Bundy and such is just... errr, nasty!

But great piece!!

[Sean M. Addams]

like the darkness you display in this one rhyme is very solid in this.... great job !!!!

[Lia]

Amazing write, great flow and very vivid images you put across. Thanks x

[*~Imperfectly Me~*]

This is really good... I like this... it was a great story within a poem... Great job... it flowed perfectly and had a great tone to it... i love the images and it just seemed to be great... Good job!

[Michelle Lea]

wow awesome work! I love your usage of words, the flow is just "killer" literally! (-:

[Blade & Blood (The ..]

What can I say? I loved it! Definitely great storyline to it. Killer vs. Mobster! Who will win? Which would you root for! lol

A serial killer with that sort of bloodlust is quite symbolic if you think about it. People who kill usually do it for a certain motive; this serial killer had no motive, but simply wanted to see the blood pour! He just enjoyed what he did, which gave him the advantage of getting the vengeful mobster.

I really liked that background you gave the serial killer. It gave me a good taste of his merciless and brutal personality.

I also agree with Dawn E. Key. The last two lines really did have a lot of meaning in it. lol "Vengeance will be upon him sevenfold." lmao! Great poem! I loved it!

Ironically Yours, Blade and Blood