Breaking The Commandments

Everybody have their own personal temptations where they couldn't resist.

 

Thou Shalt Not Forget Thy Lord...

...And I Shall Throw Down The Sword

 

Thou Shalt Not Have Another Gods...

...And I Shall Laugh At All Of The Odds

 

Thou Shalt Not Take The Lord's Name In Vain...

...And I Shall Say It Right Out Loud In The Plain

 

Thou Shalt Not Skip The Lord's Day...

...And I Shall Look At It And Run Away

 

Thou Shalt Not Dishonor Thy Father And Mother...

...And I Shall Rebel One Way Or Way Of Another

 

Thou Shalt Not Give Out The Act To Kill...

...And I Shall Know And Keep The Thrills

 

Thou Shalt Not Commit Any Adultery...

...And I Shall Run Out As The Adversary

 

Thou Shalt Not Look For To Steal...

...And I Shall Take What's For Real

 

Thou Shalt Not Speak Of The Lies...

...And I Shall Close Both Of My Eyes

 

Thou Shalt Not Do Any Of The Covet...

...And I Shall Corrupt The Covenants

 

Author's Note

Please, don't forgive me for that I have sinned.

Reviews

[KayOss]

Don't worry; you're not forgiven. This is a wonderful piece. I really enjoyed reading it. It has a certain musicality that was infectious. For some reason, this put me in the mind of Corporate Avenger. I hope you don't mind the connection; my mind made it almost subconsciously. Anyway, I think we all spend our time searching out our truths, which can and will vary from person to person. Thanks for sharing.

[Amanda]

being raised as a catholic, i understand
being one that has become disillusioned, i see
i no longer believe to the extent that it doesn't seem like sin, but the realization of what is to be

who is to say that there is a higher power by the name of god? why can't there something else?
and why do we have to ask forgiveness from said power for things that we don't see as a sin?

you tell me...but then again, this is only my opinion
well written!

[None]

You did very well with such a tough line to follow on each. Yes, we all have our own that haunt us...and if we master that one...another shows up. Excellent thoughts and admitting of sin herein. Well done!