To The Beautiful; From The Beastful

Just like Disney's "The Beauty & The Beast" except for a simple letter to The Beauty from The Beast in the poetry way.

 

I May Be Hardly Like A Man

Merely More Like The Beast

Anytime, My Heart Would Ran

Would Settle Over A Simple Feast

 

This Heart Of Mine Is Too Wild

Out Of Control, Needed To Be Tame

Don't Give The Arrow To The Child

The Cupid Already Got My Heart Aim

 

Always Been A Straightfoward

I Don't Speak Any Of The Lies

Will Take Another Steps Forward

For You To See My Sharp Eyes

 

So, You'll Know What's For Real

About What I'm Really Feeling For

There Are No Such Thing As A Deal

You're Welcome Through The Doors

 

Wouldn't Want For You To Leave

My Knees Will Stay On The Ground

Everywhere, You're Allow To Weave

Really Love For You To Stay Around

 

Author's Note

Yeah, it's safe for you to say that "The Beauty & The Beast" was one of my favorites when I was a kid.

Reviews

[♥ Courtney &hear..]

*hums one of the song's from the movie* ha ha yes Beauty and the Beast is a CLASSIC! Anywas on to your poem. It is so great. I loved it. I like how you like took on the personality of the beast and wrote to his Belle. Also it was such a sweet love poem, gurenteed to make any girl go 'awwwwwe'. Great job Joe.

[Kimberly Davis]

Awwwwww,
Joseph!! What a cool piece!! Know what my favorite parts were? I thought the title was clever and I liked the last line...it just sounds so honest and filled with pain but with a twinge of hope woven through. It was a plea. Good job. And I loved the movie as well. Got to see the Broadway musical when it was here in California. Awesome!!
Kim

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Really fantastic poem!! I loved it so much. Now you've inspired me to write one, as well!! Beautiful imagery, too. *Tales as long as time, song as old as rhyme, Beauty and the Beast...*

Perfect!

Mikey

[Done]

This is a very clever way to express the drama and love found in this story. I really like how you choose and mix your words because they work really well. Well done my friend, love your work.

Josh

[Riley]

First of, Beauty and the Beast is like my favorite movie ever. Second, I loved your poem. Really good. I loved how your really got the beasts personality down. Great job.

The second stanza is the absolute best! I loved it. So romatic and straightforward. It is a really great love poem!

[Catrinka]

I enjoyed the read! Strong use of words to create images. My favorite stanza:
This Heart Of Mine Is Too Wild
Out Of Control, Needed To Be Tame
Don't Give The Arrow To The Child
The Cupid Already Got My Heart Aim