When The Time Comes

My long lost love letter that was never taken serious and personal.

 

You

 

When The Final Moment Of The Time Comes To The End

I Will Be Around Staying Still And Will Be Waiting For You

Hopefully, We Will Become More Than Just Best Friends

Together, We Will Watch The Sky Being Painted In Blue

 

For You

 

When The Time Comes Which I've Been Waiting For So Long

My Arms Will Be Wide Open To Have You Into My Embrace

Sound Of The Music Playing Will Be Any Of Your Favorite Songs

I Promise You That There Will Be No More Of The Heartaches

 

Just You

 

When There Is A Moment That I Have Been Long Dreaming About

The Ways We Once Were As For Our Happiness And Much More

You Are More Than Welcome To Have A Try And Give It A Shout

Believe Me, It's For Real, Nothing Compare To Any Of The Folklore

 

Only You

 

When That Time Has Arrive, That Moment When The Second Get Here

I Will Never Let You Go Anymore, I Will Be More Than Just Your Gladiator

You Are Still What I Need, All What I Want, All What I Really Could Bear

Out Of Anybody Else In This World, I Will Stay Close To Be Your Protector

 

All You

 

When The Time Get There, It Will Remain To Be Where It'll Be At From Now On

There Will Be No More Of The Mistakes To Be Made, Just Only The Promises

All Of The Dreams Will Be Made And Will Come True For The Battles To Be Won

You Won't Be Forgotten, You Won't Be Alone, Otherwise You'll Be Sadly Missed

 

And That's How Much Of The Whole World I Think Of You...

 

Author's Note

Don't mind me, I just, I don't know, I guess it's safe to say that I was truly lovesick.

Reviews

[Amanda]

this is a beautiful poem, joe. it was nicely written and very emotional...to me, it seems you are promising what will be at each stage of your growing together and the relationship moving forward.

the person who you are lovesick over is a very lucky one! with luck and hopefulness, maybe this one person will see and be with you in this journey of love....

[caitiedear33]

beautiful poem...touched me

[FlawedByDesign]

Charged with emotion; you can really fell the longing for the one you love.

The only complaint I have, is the length of the latter stanzas. Too long to read in one breath and having to stop breaks the flow :(

[sweetylee1994]

T-T Ima cry now. It was beautiful. I loved it

[Alicante lullaby]

Boys say that all the time,dont they micheal,however,the time never comes.An easy excuse.just kidding.It can be an SMS favourite.THE words are simple,however,if they are earnest your beloved would have been overjoyed,if not then annoyed.What did she do?

[Sean M. Addams]

damn dude this is really deep but a very good piece.... overall nice job on this ... you never fell to impress...

[Vertigo]

beautiful write =]

[Frances O'Neill]

Very romantic! I must say I hate the capital letters on each word it is very distracting!

[Brianna Brie]

When The Time Comes Which I've Been Waiting For So Long
My Arms Will Be Wide Open To Have You Into My Embrace
Sound Of The Music Playing Will Be Any Of Your Favorite Songs
I Promise You That There Will Be No More Of The Heartaches
When That Time Has Arrive, That Moment When The Second Get Here
I Will Never Let You Go Anymore, I Will Be More Than Just Your Gladiator
You Are Still What I Need, All What I Want, All What I Really Could Bear
Out Of Anybody Else In This World, I Will Stay Close To Be Your Protector

Wow...the writer's cafe people sure do like this poem! It is such a sweet sentiment of love embodied and full. Outstanding! Thanks for entering the Missing Him, Missing Her contest.

[samantha]

very well done i love it