Urban Madness

While being locked up in the state hopsital, there's always a nightmare in every corners.

 

Somewhere Inside The Mental Institution

There Are Really Such Thing As Abomination

 

The Staffs Were The Way Of The Real Unholy

Even The Demon Disguised As The Orderly

 

Straightjackets Have Some Of The Chains

Sound Of The Long, Rustic Metals Are Pain

 

Make You Want To Cover Your Eyes And Scream

Wishing That It Was Nothing, Just Only A Dream

 

But, It's A Real Damn Nerve Wrecking Nightmare

And It Sure As Hell Definitely Will Not Go Anywhere

 

As The Countless Victims As Much Hapless

We All Are Very Lost And Totally Helpless

 

Until Came Along The Final Moment Of The Time

Ready To Die Rather Than Watching The Crimes

 

Never Will To Speak Any Of Those Unspeakable

Won't Be Able To Bear Closer To The Unbearable

 

Finally, All Freed Away From The Sadness

Also, There Will Be No More Of The Madness

 

Author's Note

There are much more to that, but if you really like it / love it, keep your eyes open for that there will be another one coming soon to the writerscafe.org near you.

Reviews

[♥ Courtney &hear..]

oh my goodness that was simply superb! "make you want to cover your eyes and scream...wishing that it was nothing, only a dream" . I loved how intense it was. I felt like i was watching the whole institution go about its daily activities of insanity. GOOD JOB!!!!!!

[lori c]

i dont know, and am not sure i want to know, how close you are to the intense pain in this writing, but it is amazing. vivid, mind altering, soul bleeding...i love the choice of capitalizing every word -- subtle like fog lights rather than high beams. wonderfully done ! am certainly going to read more.

[A.r. Bazian]

amazing!
such pain!
the technique is good!
but the poem is great!

i can hardly wait!

[Stacy]

I like what you have written, but if there is more, than I would like to see it as well.

[Pinky]

wow... i love it... do u work at a mental health institution?