Coyote's Last Stand

Coyote's Last Stand

A Poem by Joseph - Michael
"

In every life, there's always a breaking point when it comes to the reliazations.

"

 

In The Dusky Time Of The Twilight Gloaming

Brave, But The Lonely Coyote Was Roaming

He Heard The Sounds Of The Heavy Rumbling

Gotten All Confused With The Paws Trembling

So, Afraid And Went To Hide Behind The Trees

He Had The Need To Know What's There To See

Peeked Slowly And Spotted The Wolves On The Prowl

Together, The Pack Stopped And Began To Howl

He Became So Scared And Took Another Direction

In Order To Avoid The End Of His Own Destination

Later, Walked Away With The Startling Beady Eyes

Which He's All Ready To Start The Silent Soft Cry

Learned That He Really Believed To Be A Born Loser

Because It's Not Always The Best To Be A Loner

Looked Right Up To The Full Moon, Started Braying

Just Like In The Act Of The Mercy In The Praying

Was Hoping To Recieve Some Strong Signal For Help

But, Instead, There's A High Pitched Sound Of Yelp

The Pack Of The Wolves' Teeth Caved In Growling

Now, He Know That He's Not Alone, He Gave Out Yowling

Best Not To Die Alone, Need the Others To Be There, He Think

Finally, He Left The World With An Unusual Smirk And A Wink

 

© 2013 Joseph - Michael


Author's Note

Joseph - Michael
Don't mind the "animalistic grammars". Just admit what you really think of the sorrow and sadness that turned around for better, just for a moment before death, so he can die happy, you know?

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The imaging was good, but i got confused at the end. Did the coyote smile , because he died it a battle, that pack, even though not of his own, were there at the end. Or did he spot something greater then himself with in his heart or mind, that made him smile in the end. I like him smiling in the end, and the wink part. But i'm not sure about the unusual. I would have to ask to have that smile explained a little more, to truly feel the end. But thats just my opinion.
I think this has lots of potential, and an important moral lesson attatched.
Keep up the good work!

Posted 16 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.




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Wow, amazing piece of writing. On the rest, not sure.

He Know That - is this supposed to be he knew that?

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

The imaging was good, but i got confused at the end. Did the coyote smile , because he died it a battle, that pack, even though not of his own, were there at the end. Or did he spot something greater then himself with in his heart or mind, that made him smile in the end. I like him smiling in the end, and the wink part. But i'm not sure about the unusual. I would have to ask to have that smile explained a little more, to truly feel the end. But thats just my opinion.
I think this has lots of potential, and an important moral lesson attatched.
Keep up the good work!

Posted 16 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.


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Joseph - Michael
Joseph - Michael

Detroit, MI



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I'm no one special. I'm just a single father in the MMA training to kill the anger and the personal pain in order to move on. Whenever I'm not busy, even with the damn procrastination issue, I try my .. more..

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