God Forgives, But...

After learning so many things about the angels, this is what I believe.

 

God Always Has Something To Forgives

But The Angels Have Nothing To Give

For Everything That We All Have Lived

 

We All Have Something That Are So Precious

Which Made The Angels Feel So Jealous

Strong Enough To Know The Sin Of Envious

 

Sang Right After They Started The Hums

Felt Everything When They're Feeling Numb

Dared To Dream Which They Cannot Sum

 

With Our Secrets That Never Been Told

Along With The True Values Of Our Souls

Everything We Hide, They Already Know

 

Still, We're Stuck With Many Of The Hesitations

Asking For The True Divines Of The Salvations

Willing To Risk With The Cost Of The Damnations

 

As For The God, We're Already Forgiven

To The Angels, We're Already Forsaken

At The End, Nothing Will Ever Be Forgotten

 

Author's Note

I know that it may sound kind of scary when the angels will not do anything to help us, but that's what I believe; We all have to help ourselves.

Reviews

[Kena Dawn Augustine]

Very good. I love spiritual poems. This is a deep one. Yes, the angels, and God, do know everything, we cannot hide from him. One thing I disagree upoon is that in the end it won't be forgotten. Every decision we make now, will effect us in the afterlife. But we can call upon God now to help wash us clean, and h elp us to be stronger. But then again, i could have misinterpreted it. Thanks for sharing.

[Brandon Taylor-Black]

Very well written. This is an amazing piece of writing. We are taught that the Angels are there to guide us and help us....but what if that's not the case. What if Angels aren't as perfect as they're pertained to be...
This is an extremely powerful write.
Keep it up!

[laceyjane23]

Very well written, I enjoyed reading it! and i agree with you when you say in the end we have to help ourselves, very good message to pass on! keep up the good work
Laceyjane

[The Archangel Gabriel]

JM-

That is a possible interpretation. I tend to think that the angels help at times. But, like Allah, angels are into helping those who help themselves. You are right to put your faith into yourself and to not look to God or the angels for salvation from your daily trials and tribulations.

I am working on my poem "Two Springs" which you might really enjoy. Thanks for the gift.

Great write!

-Gabe

[Nana Carmine]

I really like this. It's beautiful and I love how it flows and I love how it rhymes. I truly believe angels only watch us and do not help as well so I like it a lot. Thank you for sharing with us.

~Nana Carmine

[Marie]

That was an excellent write. I love how each stanza rhymes. Thank you for sharing.