Angel No More

It's pretty ironic; Loving someone when the person no longer love you back anymore.

 

The Wings Of The Angel Are Burning

Away To The Ash; Toward The Dust

Within All Of My Heart And Soul Yearning

For That I'm Still In Love With My Lust

 

Lusting For The Scent Of Her Love

Lusting For The Sight Of Her Love

Lusting For The Sound Of Her Love

Lusting For The Taste Of Her Love

Lusting For The Touch Of Her Love

 

Giving Everything All Up, Even The Eternity

All Just For In The Name Of The Love

Entering Into The Realm Of The Mortality

All Just For One Woman Whom I Truly Love

 

Lusting For Her Scent For Me To Smell

Lusting For Her Sight For Me To See

Lusting For Her Sound For Me To Hear

Lusting For Her Taste For Me To Please

Lusting For Her Touch For Me To Feel

 

Now That She Had Forsaken Me

Refusing To Allow Me To Love Her

My Heart No Longer Beats, Only To Bleed

I Won't Give Up On Her, I'll Wait For Her

 

Still Lusting For Her Scent To Return

Still Lusting For Her Sight To Return

Still Lusting For Her Sound To Return

Still Lusting For Her Taste To Return

Still Lusting For Her Touch To Return

 

The Angel Wings Are Still Burning All Away

As I'm Still Waiting For The Return Of My Love

Right Now, All I Can Do Nothing, But To Pray

For The Returning Into The Embrace Of My Love

 

Author's Note

I know that it may be a bit too much of repetition, but she happen to loves music, that's why I got "lost in the world of the music". Also, this writing is somewhat inspired by the song, "Wish I Had An Angel" by Nightwish.

Reviews

[Wolfwind Words]

I feel that it may have been "that to much" that made it just right!
I brings a story to us of love and love lost, and how strongly people attach to certain people.
I find that this is poem that brings a great lesson of morality with it.
It is so true, for so many people love so strong and so deep, that it's hard to move on. And all thats left to calm them, is the memories and the hope of their return.
Great writing!

[Kim S.]

The Angel Wings Are Still Burning All Away
As I'm Still Waiting For The Return Of My Love
Right Now, All I Can Do Nothing, But To Pray

Simply amazing, I could see this as a song

[laceyjane23]

This is a very beautiful piece, I enjoyed reading it!
Good luck in my contest.
Laceyjane

[~Mary Ann~]

Such a thoughtful piece written for the one in your heart. The pain and heartache flows upon the page...
The emotion that flows along with the love that is felt is amazing... and the light of hope that the love shall return once again in to your embrace blazes bright!

A wonderful write Joseph Michael!

[just is]

Still Lusting For Her Scent To Return
Still Lusting For Her Sight To Return
Still Lusting For Her Sound To Return
Still Lusting For Her Taste To Return
Still Lusting For Her Touch To Return

These are some amazing words here, like this alot

[Catastrophe]

truly beautiful...its been said already...the words are just so perfect
and i really like it...
great write

[darkgurl]

Now this is an AWESOME write! here, I throughly enjoyed this it's perfection.....Kim

[Gema]

aww i love that it could be a song lol love the way you've expressed it with a diffrence! Love it! and it's true!

[Kelly D. Burris]

I love the intensity and how you used the senses to bring it into focus more.
Beautiful write. Hope she likes it.

[Blade & Blood (The ..]

Lol Oh yeah, this would make a pretty neat song if you match it with the right genre. XD

...Anyways... this was a really freakin' awesome poem! I really enjoyed reading it because in my head, I was reminded of a banned book from the Bible which depicted God's angels lusting or falling in love with human woman (laying them, teaching them magic, etc.)-- but unlike that specific story, your poem is a bit more romantic, even though it constantly says "lust" rather than "love". Great job on this! I had fun reading it. :)

Ironically Yours. Blade and Blood

P.S. Never worry about how long a poem is or how much effort you put into it. It's your work... allow yourself to give in to the Muse! ;)

[Sally Edwards]

Stunning and piognant, it clucthed at my heartstrings and pulled them hard, I know that feeling of no longer being loved, it still hurts after a year has gone by.......... I love this poem, tragically beautiful.