Running From EDEN

Please leave a review for this. It's a ridiculously rough draft, but I'd like to say the skelaton on the story has promise. Please help! It is a story with alot of biblical underpinnings, but it is NOT a religious story. If your offended, I'm ok with that, because atleast it made an impression, but I mean no harm and I respect christianity as much as any other religion. Please read this as the fictional, creative process that it is, and nothing more. Thanks in advanced. Btw, I hope I did that right. its my first upload.