SILVER HAZE

she floated towards the fields ready for harvest
leaving ruby footprints on earthly clouds
she bowed in lavish gardens asking Jupiters honesty
and I am left in her breath of silver haze
skimming oceans of her odyssey in affectionate ways
her liquid touch grabbing stars from the evening sky
birthing galaxies in her eyes through winds of aspen
caressing her dragons high on a hill as she
laughs happily in her creations, ethereal libations
tasting heavenly realms with every cup I fill
and with the lightest kiss she extends me her gift of
omnipotence as I inhale her air of life
for the very first time...

Reviews

[joshua deathdealer]

I love the out this world visuals and the deep meaning. Beautiful work Rene.

[Amila Jay]

Your words are like drifting in the air .. an excellent write :))

[Kaylor Mason]

Sorta reminds me of a good cup of coffee in the morning . . . perhaps laced with something a little stronger :)

[Lily Mae]

I love the visions that came to mind while reading this. Very passionate and mysterious.. deep in the red and all on inhale.. :) xo

[Leslie Philibert]

Fine poem, like the way the syntax goes over the lines and the very rich metaphors, a poem with a big theme and lots of good imagery, good work.

[Aidz]

AHh this one is tasty ... let me drink of it and I too will inhale

[Ruth]

This is such a refreshing poem...I feel, more light aired for you and it suits you so well :) A charming piece to read hon, intricately so and holds so much beauty. I really enjoyed this, the pace is wonderful. I know people always comment on flow or pace, but for me, they are two different things in a poem and this has both in beautiful abundance!
Loved it xoxo

[Larry Dyson]

love thepicture you have painted with the words

[Coyote Poetry]

Artwork and words were amazing. Description create a vision of beauty. I like the ending to the outstanding poem.
Coyote