JOURNEY

there are no blueprints
only footprints left behind
on an unknown path, asphalt or sand,
in every heart lies a good man
 
there are things to be said
as well as things to do
actions are weapons
love of family is truth

 

stay humble as you grow
life will show you things
that will only pertain to you
metaphysically or spiritually
find your infinity
burn your flame
in red and blues

 

you will move on
from the guidance you know
on your own blessed with
the love your family has shown

 

be your own man
and make your own stand
have no fear when you rest
in Gods hands

Author's Note

My sister asked me to write a poem for her Son who is turning 21 in a few days, something about going out on his own and discovering life, becoming a man and being responsible, and so I wrote this for him.

Reviews

[Cassie Fraga]

and it holds a great message indeed!! very inspiring and full of TRUTH!! loved it to the fullest!! thank you for sharing such a master piece!!

[Brandon S. Whitten]

Good read and well written.

[light and ashes]

I love it. I love these concluding words the most: "to be your own man and make your own stand have no fear when you rest in God's hands."

[jennifer little]

great poem i loved it great job keep up the good work and thanks for sharing it with me

[Kenneth The Poet]

Deep truths spoken here I think.

[SuicidePact.]

So wise :D

[Chris]

It isn't easy being who we are expected to be... even when its just our own expectations. Every morning the mirror awaits...and our own look inside is one of the toughest to have to face.

[Sethnicity]

That's a great write my friend very relevant and something I could could see my self reading to my future kids some day! Way to break out some Artist knowledge for your Family... Man! :)

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

There is wisdom in the words that are are true treasure. As I read along, I felt as if I was gaining the knowledge of generations before me.