CELEBRATORY SAVAGES
A Poem by Rene Velez
A unit of dysfunction I see before me like a secret that must be kept, there are no fair warning in the vanities of families, locked in vice and deadly sins, carried like designer labels tucked in the fabric, stitched in the inseam of blood and time physical dependence, absence, and ignorance, debilitary pieces in the game of life, in every addict, denial it's wife left in a dark closet of obscurity and they will convince it is as it should be in bathroom parties on New Years Eve festering their disease a living room sofa overflowing with high pitch chatter boxes of nonsense and drivel after every sip of incoherence Cocaine crystal apparent under nasal passages, celebratory savages I flick my cigarette over the balcony and watch it slowly descend twenty three stories down
© 2012 Rene Velez
Author's Note
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This is a poem that deals with issues within family, friends and addiction...celebration and gatherings where control substances are abused...hey I live in NYC, it runs rampid....I just write what I see.
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Reviews
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Man...this is a gritty story that really gets under your skin. The images flood the imagination in such a way that one may need to take a break between each stanza. This is one of those poems that has powerful imagery that comes across through wave after punishing wave. You left no time to recover after each blow. I really enjoyed the way you used the energy of it all.
Posted 12 Years Ago
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