UNMINDFUL

My attempt at Alphabetic Sequence.

and beliefs commit
darker eternal fathoms,
gasping hours internally
joust Karma lovingly,
mammoth nights,
obdormitions perception,
quale reclamations sabotage twilight,
undyingly,
visions wander xeniumly
yearning zen

Author's Note

My attempt at Alphabetic Sequence. dabbling in structures

Reviews

[Sleepless]

wow impressing youa rea genious for creating this ! its amazing and it alla meks sense all fits everything :P nice poem !:)

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Whew that is one alphabetical and vocabulary filled poetic write. Nice one.

[Lily Mae]

Well you did it well...both through the alphabet and through the meaning of each word.. excellent write..x

[Coyote Poetry]

You did very well with the use of the alphabet. Making a poem that make sense is a hard task using the letters in order. Zen is a good ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote

[Jeremy Baker]

Very well done!

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Perfectly structured and makes a moral point, with proper sense my love, well done.

[Cassie Fraga]

OOOOHHHHH!!! **tips my lyrical wand** and the attempt was AMAZING!! this structure is not easy... I tried it once and lets just say it ended up a mess... hahaha!! you did a great job here mistah!! very talented you are indeed!!

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

lovely Rene!

[roarke]

interesting what comes out when working with vehicles like this isn't it?

[Aidz]

Quite a challenge Rene and accomplished well