DADDY'S LITTLE GIRL
A Poem by
Rene Velez
Written by my daughter Abbey for me, I'm a lucky Dad.
As I look out to see I remember the times on your knee when it came up to my biggest fears you came and wiped away my tears you always seem to know when I need a smile especially when you haven't seen one in a while we seem to always be on the same page even though there's a difference in age we know how to make each other laugh and that makes time fly fast daddy that's why I'm so thankful for you I would never ask for anyone new I love you so very much because you help me with all my problems and such I know you wish to give me the world but I'm good with the title "Daddy's Little Girl"
© 2012 Rene Velez
Author's Note
A poem written by my Daughter Abbey who is 9 years old, I think she takes after her Dad, man was I impressed.
Reviews
Tell ya wot Rene time you hung up yr pen she's a lot better than you, and time you took some lessons from her...I think she wins some Candied Corn so time to share buddy
Posted 12 Years Ago
She definitely has your special gift. I have a daughter the same age, and this is a wonderful reminder that the gift of words has no age limit. Tell her to keep up the wonderful work, and your friends here at the Cafe look forward to more of her writings!
Posted 12 Years Ago
She definitely has your special gift. I have a daughter the same age, and this is a wonderful reminder that the gift of words has no age limit. Tell her to keep up the wonderful work, and your friends here at the Cafe look forward to more of her writings!
yep, ya better move over and make room ... dad.
Posted 12 Years Ago
yep, ya better move over and make room ... dad.
A beautiful poem. Our children give us hope and strength to go forward. I like the complete poem. A very nice ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote
Posted 12 Years Ago
A beautiful poem. Our children give us hope and strength to go forward. I like the complete poem. A very nice ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote
AAAWWWW... this is so cute, u make me wanna share the one my 9 year old son did for me. Tell her to stay with it... the talent will only grow as we all know... thank you for sharing such a touching piece Rene!!
Posted 12 Years Ago
AAAWWWW... this is so cute, u make me wanna share the one my 9 year old son did for me. Tell her to stay with it... the talent will only grow as we all know... thank you for sharing such a touching piece Rene!!
Love this work. I got one on the way, and this inspires me Rene.
Posted 12 Years Ago
Love this work. I got one on the way, and this inspires me Rene.
This just smacks me straight in the heart. I feel the same way about my son that turned 18 yesterday..and wow.. what a feeling. Having children is the best and I'm sure if she's taking after her Father being the best comes easy..xo
Posted 12 Years Ago
This just smacks me straight in the heart. I feel the same way about my son that turned 18 yesterday..and wow.. what a feeling. Having children is the best and I'm sure if she's taking after her Father being the best comes easy..xo
fortunant..she has your jeans..:>)
Posted 12 Years Ago
fortunant..she has your jeans..:>)
It's not only you who is impressed...... It's great for a 9 year old kid....
She possesses her dad's skills.... Cheers!
Posted 12 Years Ago
It's not only you who is impressed...... It's great for a 9 year old kid....
She possesses her dad's skills.... Cheers!
I am impressed! Good to see the two of you enjoying your time, living in the moment.
Brings a little water to my eyes. Nice!
Great job, Abbey!
Posted 12 Years Ago
I am impressed! Good to see the two of you enjoying your time, living in the moment.
Brings a little water to my eyes. Nice!
Great job, Abbey!
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