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POET SUBMERGED

POET SUBMERGED

A Poem by Rene Velez

I write despite conflicts
and anger I have inside
I see no signs in my
metaphysical plain
where my stories reside
away from reality where
hope has died and where
my aging body remains

I am homeless in liquid form
dark in the depths of little horn
I taste the drink of liquid ink
black in dance, images perform
letters adorned prickly and thorned

I again cast a light
in the darkness
of written word
where only echoes are heard
I am a Poet submerged...

in thought

© 2012 Rene Velez


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Whew... depth of a poet! Love it. Awesome write.
Love these lines:
"I am homeless in liquid form"

"I taste the drink of liquid ink
black in dance, images perform
letters adorned prickly and thorned"

"I again cast a light
in the darkness
of written word"

Difficult to choose... but those lines/parts I love and enjoyed a lot, though the whole write is awesome.

Posted 13 Years Ago


SPin spin SPin as always my friend tasting of ink

Posted 13 Years Ago


LOVE the flow on this Rene!! and how you did it all in THOUGHT!! truly gifted you are my friend!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


I am in the mood for the ride.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Rene Velez
Rene Velez

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