AGAINST ALL ODDS
A Poem by
Rene Velez
I am the underdog I am at the bottom Under corporate shoes I am the rubble Struggle is my Muse I am wrapped in her black and grey hues I have set my path in stone Until weak in heart and frail of bone To wander... I have no home I climb the slope I revel in hope Granted safe passage Through Brimstone and smoke Wars forged by fires Wars waged by liars Against all odds I walk with God
© 2012 Rene Velez
Reviews
one word: amen.
Posted 13 Years Ago
I hope God is walking with us. Poem tell a story of many. Many looking for answers by a world control by the 3%. I like the ending to the outstanding poem.
Coyote
Posted 13 Years Ago
I hope God is walking with us. Poem tell a story of many. Many looking for answers by a world control by the 3%. I like the ending to the outstanding poem.
Coyote
Against all odds
I walk with God.
to read one's life story through the eyes of a poet (so you are a poet)
thank you! =)
Posted 13 Years Ago
Against all odds
I walk with God.
to read one's life story through the eyes of a poet (so you are a poet)
thank you! =)
Brilliant write about our present time culture. This piece has a tremendously smooth flow to it. Wonderful write.
Posted 13 Years Ago
Brilliant write about our present time culture. This piece has a tremendously smooth flow to it. Wonderful write.
Seems like being underestimated as the underdog. I like this line:
"Until weak in heart and frail of bone"
Posted 13 Years Ago
Seems like being underestimated as the underdog. I like this line:
"Until weak in heart and frail of bone"
To kewl by half Rene
Posted 13 Years Ago
To kewl by half Rene
wow... deep read... love the ending... very strong indeed!!
Posted 13 Years Ago
wow... deep read... love the ending... very strong indeed!!
Intense read. A thought-provoker for sure.
Posted 13 Years Ago
Intense read. A thought-provoker for sure.
This makes me think of Fight Club. Hit zero. Go below and experience enlightenment. This is very strong and philosophical. :) Great write! :)
Posted 13 Years Ago
This makes me think of Fight Club. Hit zero. Go below and experience enlightenment. This is very strong and philosophical. :) Great write! :)
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Added on January 16, 2012
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