FAMILY TREE
A Poem by
Rene Velez
We are rich in blood winds tug on a family tree life embraces undeniably water and soil abundant with love sun shines yet the Leaves still fall... absently you shrug and lose kindly love walks you blindly in a death of brotherly love longhorns buried deep Sun gives branches no warmth... I am branded by tongue lashes from speak evils you invoke, fire in breath, dragon in smoke Bark has been singed... your future will beckon my return when the blood is dry And the heart has burned Winter has hands like death...
© 2012 Rene Velez
Reviews
oooooo.... such a somber feeling... so sad when family hurts eachother... I feel it Rene! thank you for sharing!!
Posted 13 Years Ago
Wow, this is great. It has a unique rythym, and the wording is perfect and relatable. We choose our friends, not our family. A wonderful piece.
Posted 13 Years Ago
Wow, this is great. It has a unique rythym, and the wording is perfect and relatable. We choose our friends, not our family. A wonderful piece.
A poem with truth in the words. Blood should bring people together and create strength. Sometime unkind words can lead us away and we can't return. The poem had a sad tone and the ending can be the end. Thank you for the outstanding poem. Made me think this evening.
Coyote
Posted 13 Years Ago
A poem with truth in the words. Blood should bring people together and create strength. Sometime unkind words can lead us away and we can't return. The poem had a sad tone and the ending can be the end. Thank you for the outstanding poem. Made me think this evening.
Coyote
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Added on January 12, 2012
Last Updated on March 28, 2012
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