ZEN
A Poem by
Rene Velez
My
fingers drumming steadily on the table, I am in a zone of Zen, clear of
mind but not focused, just a blank stare of oblivion, my
other hand holds a pen... Likened to a samurai before duel or death only the now is left to mock the present, seconds to render it's beauty at best I engage in my quest
I seek the majestic in my mental plain of creativity connecting
spiritually, the body physically weak in my art, words possess the
strongest form Here is where I find my heart, unguided, I will find my way...
© 2011 Rene Velez
Reviews
print it sign it frame it and one day when i open my cafe I would love to post this and one other one of your amazing works in my shop.
Posted 12 Years Ago
mmmm... very well expressed... a feeling that all of writers understand.
very nice write Rene!!! = )
Posted 12 Years Ago
mmmm... very well expressed... a feeling that all of writers understand.
very nice write Rene!!! = )
LOVE LOVE LOVE THIS IT'S SO CREATIVE AND FULL OF TALENT!
Posted 12 Years Ago
LOVE LOVE LOVE THIS IT'S SO CREATIVE AND FULL OF TALENT!
very well chosen words, it actually invites us all to seek a state of serenity before we start writing. The poem is very good, thanks a lot for sharing!!!!!! =)
Posted 12 Years Ago
very well chosen words, it actually invites us all to seek a state of serenity before we start writing. The poem is very good, thanks a lot for sharing!!!!!! =)
Nice to find a place to know peace and calm. Zen is a good state to be in. Hard to find the place in the world where the mind can find any rest.
"I seek the majestic in my mental plain of creativity
connecting spiritually, the body physically weak in my art, "
I believe all of us must have a place of happiness. I see my grandchildren. I know I have purpose for a while. Their hopeful eyes give me the strength not to give up. A strong ending to a outstanding poem.
Coyote
Posted 12 Years Ago
Nice to find a place to know peace and calm. Zen is a good state to be in. Hard to find the place in the world where the mind can find any rest.
"I seek the majestic in my mental plain of creativity
connecting spiritually, the body physically weak in my art, "
I believe all of us must have a place of happiness. I see my grandchildren. I know I have purpose for a while. Their hopeful eyes give me the strength not to give up. A strong ending to a outstanding poem.
Coyote
Oooooh. I like this. I love the description you put in this poem. I can easily see myself doing this. Though, that is how I look before I start writing :p
Very good job :)
Posted 12 Years Ago
Oooooh. I like this. I love the description you put in this poem. I can easily see myself doing this. Though, that is how I look before I start writing :p
Very good job :)
Transcendental and invigorating...through pen and elements of creativity...a peace to the self :) Wonderful love xoxo
Posted 12 Years Ago
Transcendental and invigorating...through pen and elements of creativity...a peace to the self :) Wonderful love xoxo
As the Muse of Stone planted shallow ..rather on the articualted sands of ...time.
Posted 12 Years Ago
As the Muse of Stone planted shallow ..rather on the articualted sands of ...time.
Nice write. This is as Jon Stewart would say, your moment of Zen.
Posted 12 Years Ago
Nice write. This is as Jon Stewart would say, your moment of Zen.
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