ODE TO THE MOSQUITO

In through my open window they come
and bombard my room
a squadron prone to glitch my last nerve
oh how I hate you m***********s
the filth and dirt you bring in my territorial air
the flutter of your erratic winged flair
aerial combat in it's truest form
the spark for the wright brothers
gravitational brainstorm...
but I am a weapon in my own making
the truest enemy you will have
from the day of creation
I will flatten each one that steps in my path
partially insane, talking to myself as I laugh
I am the bloody surface to air missile
the wiper of blood with a tissue
I admit I have issues when it comes to them
my unholy hell punishment to be covered in
the plastic grid an extension of my arm
I was given a gift to do them harm
I'm quick with pin-point accuracy
I catch them unarmed
I am merciful at best
with the kiss of death,
swift, I never miss...
a flick of the wrist,
"I GOT YOU B***H"...

Reviews

[C.]

This is just great c:

[Bailey C. Writing]

LOL You did something beautiful here- combined humor with GOOD poetry. I laughed and smiled through the whole thing, and favorited it xD Funny funny, while still being a good write. Good job man, I hate mosquitoes too

[Maya Storm]

sniff, sniff poor little mosquito he didn't even see it coming, you giant monster. Dude was minding his own business and then you end his fun :(. You're sentenced five minutes of reflection.

It's funny Rene, I enjoyed the read.

[Aidz]

Luve this, I fucken hate the little bloodsuckers... minions that they are ;)

[Phil]

hahaha. A real feel gooder even with the hatred peppered throughout. "The plastic grid an extension of my arm" love that line. Great job. Thanks for the review.

[joshua deathdealer]

Death to the mosquitoes and the f*****g love bugs, I hate love bugs. They were designed by a college close by to eat mosquitoes but they don't. All they do is ruin the wash job on the car while I'm driving through hordes of them on the way to work or where ever. Funny write Rene, I love it.

[WatashLegend]

This was great, smash those pesky little b******s I say, good write Rene I leave with a smile.

[Ruth]

Cool :) I have become increasingly allergic to mosquito bites...got one last year that bit me under the eye and it looked as though I had been punched LOL
I love this piece xx

[brenda]

lmao !! i love this great poem i hate mosquitoes too everywhere i go they bite me :/ still love the poem!:)