APOLLO

my words are not ready
like puzzle pieces connecting
childhood fears in my grown up years
allowing eyes to hear my hidden tears
all my ideas I've seen disappear,
results of my short term memory failing me...
clutter in my mental debris, honestly,
pulling on my goatee thinking till it hurts me
I’ve seen better days,

haunted by unknown tomorrows,
the insecure urban bravado, I am Apollo,
I have no Muse but have created a truce
with despair and imagery, this is my trinity
Willingly, I write in my lyrical infinity
And though it marks me, labeled at best,
I am still on my quest, for I am only a guest
In time…

Reviews

[Cassie Fraga]

WOW!!!! UUUUHHHH??? why dont you have n e reviews on this one??? this is awesome!! screaming of emotion, and excellent on word play... the flow of true feeling! no better way to express then in lyrical rhyme!!
** I am still on my quest, for I am only a guest in time** ((RAW))
thank you for sharing brah!!!

**tips my lyrical wand to you**

[Casper]

You are so gifted. I got goosebumps from just reading this. You know how to write so.. Lovely. I love your work.

[WhiteWillow]

So far, this is my favorite piece of yours.The rhyme scheme and wording are incredible, not to mention the flow of your thought-process from beginning to end; its seamless! Into my library...

[MS. BABy]

i LOVE THIS LAST LINE.....u have become one of my favorites....