ACCEPTED REASONING

Released by the birth
of the consummate marriage
i became the manipulator
of the English language
where the smallest atoms become gigantic
where tropical raindrops hold atlantis
where the winds caress grassland glades
letters refined to the likeness
of a samurai blade
beauty defined in the mist of chaos
manifesting myself in this spiritual seance
words are a reason for life taking in air
to exist if i dare
this is why i share
i write for a likeness
a readers smile
accepted reasoning
when one's soul is on trial

Reviews

[WatashLegend]

powerful words explode from this poem. The honesty makes it pure yet tough, great write

[Aidz]

As Kenneth said "Yoda you are, prose yes"

Just slice me with that samurai Rene

[Kenneth The Poet]

Adept, you are a Yoda with the prose.

[joshua deathdealer]

"where tropical raindrops hold atlantis" woot woot "Accepting reasoning" very powerful words indeed. Nicely done.

[light and ashes]

I love this very much!

[brenda]

awesome poem !:)

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

interesting picture you chose for the poem, i like it... really nice lines and different, i love how you wrote this, and i really enjoyed this line and the ending:
"words are a reason for life taking in air" :D

[Bailey C. Writing]

You've gotten the reader's smile.
I love reading what you write, it's so moving ^^ I understand the message being conveyed here, and I do think you're a true writer, and a very good one at that. Your comparisons were good and you put emotion into this write :)

[Coyote Poetry]

I enjoyed the poem. I like the logic of your words.
"words are a reason for life taking in air
to exist if i dare
this is why i like to share"
Life is a opportunity to do good or nothing. Better to dance with joy and happiness then with regret and sadness. A outstanding poem.
Coyote