A WALK WITH AUTUMN

A WALK WITH AUTUMN

A Poem by Rene Velez
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Nature

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unseen

nature blows
whispers in my ear
leafs

lush

colored

carpeted
end another year
giants still...

in grace were made to sway
heavens tears lead the way

in a canopy of grey...

© 2011 Rene Velez


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Quite impressive.....it has such a wonderful flow to it and powerful delivery.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Rene Velez

10 Years Ago

One of my favs John
Beautiful imagry! This is one of those pieces where you can hear it be read out loud and see exactly what the person is saying.

~Aurora

Posted 13 Years Ago


I live in Canada and we get winter and a sprinkle of summer... now I know what autumn should look and feel like :) neat

Posted 13 Years Ago


It is already getting so hot here, this makes me wish for the coolness of Autumn. Lovely!

Posted 13 Years Ago


And the seasons bleed into one another :)
Beautiful love, but you know I like your style a lot lol
xx

Posted 13 Years Ago


Oh how very beautiful! This is so perfect as I walk through Autumn into Winter - your words are music to my ears:)

Posted 13 Years Ago


Love this..
Short, beautiful.. and totally my type of poem..



Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on March 26, 2011
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Rene Velez
Rene Velez

New York City, NY



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