LIKE DISTANT GALAXIES

And through the window
I fell, a bed of stars
to break the fall,
emotions tattered,
circling like
the rings of Saturn,

unhappily,
a connection separated
like distant galaxies,

personal comments to
jab at the soul, like pin pricks
unsteady and cold, pulling
towards the blackest hole

Silence will grip and blind
like a lunar eclipse,
love will come undone
when lacking warmth
and comfort like the sun.

Reviews

[Cat]

Okay this is one my favorites, honestly one of the best pieces I've read on here, A+

[Rene Velez]

Thanks Cat