ICE CHIPS AND CLEAR LIQUIDS

ICE CHIPS AND CLEAR LIQUIDS

A Poem by Rene Velez

It was similar
But not a Monet,
Same technique,
Different color palette
But good nonetheless

It hung on the wall
Right next to the hospital bed
Easy to look at despite
The pain, a pain
Fitting for muddled gloom

Ice chips and clear liquids
Transparent with little nourishment
Only asking for a glimpse
to poke and prod
Like white lab coats

Distant and caring.


© 2014 Rene Velez


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Sounds like someone had surgery

Posted 10 Years Ago


Rene Velez

10 Years Ago

What's up Ric. Thanks for stopping by, in the hospital for an infection, getting better my friend.

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Added on November 3, 2014
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Rene Velez
Rene Velez

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