SEA FOAM SUNSET

A walk upon sea shells
lightly in step along
their Jagged way
white sands
mark the intrusion
amongst a sea foam sunset
engraving footprints
erased by the relentless sea
where once there was me.

Reviews

[paul sal.....]

Obviously, you are still here, and so is the sea..........ocean, maybe there are still some shells,etc

[emmajoy]

'.. amongst a sea foam sunset .. '

There's beautiful sadness in this brief poem, made me gasp at the end. You have a way of making words sing their own song.

[John Anderson]

Very moving and wonderfully written.

[K Scott Smith]

This has such feeling, longing and intensity. The words seem to flow very smoothly

[Emily Ring]

Sad and beautiful. Your words are both delicate and intriguing.

[Blake Fodor]

I found this writing to be very well done, vivid, interesting and exciting. It moved very quickly and held my attention throughout.