FEET ON THE GROUND, HAPPY...

I am glad to be around
feet on the ground
happy writing poetry
sharing a mental sound,
words laced like sexy lingerie
in open space, a taste of
something new,
deep and cold
dark and bold
letters stuck on my
clothes like static cling,

if I could I would sing
every word like
the sweetest bird
greeting a morning sun,
I am the son of no one
you know but I am relative,

a message imperative
in this twisted dimension,
I only ask a bit of attention
for my vision, wishing you
the stars and a space on Mars
if that is your will

or spill the oceans into a
bowl and quench the thirst
of your third eye

for you to acknowledge
is to know that I am alive.

Reviews

[Kenneth The Poet]

Good work, a pleasure to read.

[Blue Ivory]

This one is pretty artisitc and creative. I like the imagery.

[ayosonolowo]

nice poem, keep writing sir.

[Baby Ricochet]

Great, thought provoking piece as always. Your poetry has a gentle grace I've always enjoyed. My poetry is more like yelling at traffic.

[Rene Velez]

LOL, Ric. your a talent in your own way, I appreciate you.

[Baby Ricochet]

Thanks bro..........

[Ruth]

Rene...you always inspire me and are one hell of a Poet. You will always have my attention here x

[Rene Velez]

Thanks Poppy, your a sweetie

[Ruth]

Always my pleasure x

[Rene Velez]

you are* lol

[Ruth]

lol Mwah! You are a gem x

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A guiding and relative piece that makes one think of clear mindedness, well done, good read.

[Rene Velez]

Thank you Thomas

[Coyote Poetry]

Good to know you are alive and well. Always a pleasure to read your amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Rene Velez]

Thanks Coyote