Make A Choice

Make A Choice

A Poem by Renaye

Your mind drifts into overdrive, 
so many directions you could take.
Even though you're sleep deprived, 
your mind is wide awake. 
One choice could break your heart,
another might even set you free.
If only you knew where to start, 
and didn't fear so much what could be.
The hurt comes from one place,
peace seems to be on the other side.
The despair that's upon your face,
Has now helped you to decide.
Choose peace over anything mean,
if you care about who you are.
Keep your emotions fully clean,
and don't let them push you too far.

© 2019 Renaye


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Very well done! In the immortal words of Rush..."If you choose not to decide you still have made a choice"

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i am reminded of an old Gary Wright song..."Dream Weaver"--
and the line.."fly me away to the bright side of the moon"
lots of emotion in this.
j.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I agree one hundred percent with this poem. The words you use are very meaningful. "Choose peace over anything mean,if you care about who you are," I love this line. This was a nice and illuminating poem.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Renaye

5 Years Ago

Thank you Franco, I'm glad you understood it. I've learned a lot lately about how much mean things .. read more

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Renaye
Renaye

Australia



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My name is Renaye. I am Australian born and raised. I have always enjoyed writing. I love to let my imagination run free! I love to write short stories, novels, lyrics, and poems. I get a little.. more..

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